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Title:- 4/10 The title should be something which is centre of whole book but here i didn't felt like it . This title was definitely a unique one but not eye catching and attractive. I would advised to go for something good. Like a title with a subtitle
Cover :- 8/10 The cover is the first thing which a person notice first about the book. So it have to be attractive . The cover was neatly edited . Even the small things are also given too much attention like the forest trees and the fix behind the lan and wei . The font used definitely suits the cover but title is somehow hard to read . If you had some quotes over it . It will be more good
Description:- 5/10 Every reader, before reading the book , reads the description so , it should be attractive and curiosity creating . The description is detailed which is good but bad at some time because mostly readers get bored by reading such a detailed description. It should have some dialogues for creating a suspence and interest
Concept and plot:- 8/10 The real plot is something which is needed up write a book . The plot was pretty enjoyable. I really didn't know much about the nine tailed fox but after reading it . I really liked it
Character introduction and development:- 5/10 Now this is the place where you have to improve. The characters were not introduced too well . I really had to read the introduction twice but still the characters were not clear to me . I have never read this type of story before so it was complicated for me but many readers can leave the just because they didn't understood the intro . I will suggest you to make to simple and easier to understand
Coming to the characters development, then we sees that characters are still not developed they are developing but slowly. That's good they need to take time to develop themselves. I really like the lan zhan's character
Pace :- 6/10 Talking about the pace then it was little bit slow . It was good to be steady and taking time but sometimes you just need to fasten and mention the time to make it look better. While reading i felt myself drowning into it which is a good sign .
Grammar and vocabulary:- 7/10 Coming over to grammar then . It was pretty smooth . It was well edited . I didn't find any grammatical error. The vocabulary you used was simple and understanding. The sentence structure were fine . It was hard to find much mistakes
Writing style:- 8/10 The writing style was good . It gave the vibe of novel . The thing I loved about your writing style is that you didn't made such a big paragraph. There were limited words in paragraph which was comfortable to read .
Overall impression:- 6/10
Rating on book :6/10
Total : 63/100
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