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The title "Past in the Spotlight" effectively conveys the central theme of the story, which involves the characters moving back to the past and being actors. It captures the idea of the spotlight, which adds an exciting element to the plot. It's catchy and attention-grabbing!
Book cover: 10/10
The cover is beautiful and the editing element of both the leads' faces is just perfect with the perfectly aligned and showed texts for the title.lt all look so well thought out and visually appealing. The side elements like camara which symbolises the actors world as they see the camera everyday and a time which is related to the past .The cover is Catchy and that is the important element as it draws a lot of readers. The fact that there are banners for the story shows the hard work and dedication put into it. I can tell that a lot of effort went into creating a visually stunning cover that perfectly represents the story. well done!
Blurb: 7/10
The blurb is long, and it holds the essential elements which are important for a blurb but I think it's slightly giving the plot of the story . It's important to have the essential elements without giving away too much of the plot. I could see you tried to hide the mystery and the real twist of the story and that's a great idea . But try to give information but not all . Adding some intriguing dialogue from the book can definitely make it more captivating and hook readers right away. Just remember to strike a balance between providing enough information to hook readers and keeping some surprises for them to discover while reading.
Concept and Plot: 10/10
This book is truly remarkable and its concept is nothing short of amazing! While there are many stories out there that touch upon the topic of time travel, this one stands out with its unique energy and fresh perspective. The plot is so captivating that it keeps you engaged from the very first page, and the scenes are incredibly well-crafted, especially those that involve the translation of different languages. Overall, it's a fantastic read that will leave you wanting more!
Pace: 9/10
The pace of this book is simply balanced! It strikes the perfect balance between being fast-paced and slow, ensuring that readers stay engaged without feeling overwhelmed. The smooth flow of the story allows us to truly grasp what the characters are trying to convey. It's a delightful experience to follow the story's rhythm and catch every detail. The pacing adds immense value to the book, making it an enjoyable read. Keep up the great work!
Character Introduction and Character Development: 9/10
The characters in this book are truly captivating! From the male lead's frustration and cluelessness towards the totally new place and different languages . Or to the shooting scene that introduces them as actors, everything feels so engaging. The female lead brings a different energy that adds a fascinating contrast. While the chemistry between them may not be fully developed yet, I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing how it unfolds in the upcoming chapters.
Grammar and Vocabulary: 5/10
The story presents a promising concept with intriguing characters and plotlines. However, there are some areas that could use improvement. The grammar and punctuation errors, as well as occasional spelling mistakes, can be distracting and make it challenging for readers to fully understand the characters' conversations. It's important to ensure that the different language which is not English is clear and easily comprehensible, especially for readers who may not have prior knowledge of the original language. Despite these issues, the plot and scenes are impressive, and the characters are engaging. The author's ideas for the story are commendable, but it would benefit from further refinement in terms of language usage.
Writing Style: 5/10
The writing style is good, using different languages is interesting but frankly I couldn't understand most of the time what the other person was saying as there were no proper translations and it made me go out of the flow. The story is amazing but this thing made it drop.This led to some disruptions in the flow of the narrative.
While the story is amazing, I felt that there could have been more emphasis on background details and character emotions. By delving deeper into these aspects, By enhancing the originality and emotional connection of the plot. This thing makes it more interesting and helps readers to visualise and book is everything about visualising something. It will also make the reader attached to the book .
Overall Impression: 7/10
I was impressed with the dual language and the translation and how the plot was unique.
However, I guess adding the English translation for all the dialogues and giving the background and how the characters are feeling will make the story more interesting.
Keep working on it. The magic is made just need some more ingredients to make to magical
Rating on Book : 8/10
I enjoyed the chapter till now and I will definitely read the upcoming chapters and see how you showed your real emotions and real magic in the pages. Sounds exciting,right.
Good luck author! I hope to see more from you in future!!
Thank you!!
Total: 80/100
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