Chapters 5 -10
The cover should be adjusted so the smaller words on it can be read clearly. At first glance, it doesn't seem to be a sci-fi book but it is a good cover.
Although I feel like the blurb is a little off, or it's missing something. There is a sentence that tells the end of humanity but then after the young humans walk the earth, it's unexplained how they came to be. I think it needs a supporting sentence, just a tidbit of a timeline to their existence.
In contrast, the next chapters continued to thoroughly impress me with the peculiar theme that is all part of the fiction, in sci-fi. Grammar wise, I only found little mistakes that could be fixed with proofreading before posting.
In general, the plot is very diverse, the originality is solid.
It has some seriously dark undertones, I noticed.
You also have very good descriptive writing skills. Though it has too much gore for my liking.
Faceless is a draft novel that shows your great passion for writing. 👏
-Empress🐧
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