Hiya there.
Im Gabe if you dont know aka this books writer.
I started this book like what 2-3 years ago? I hope your able to tell the change of quality from the start and now.
Basically first, I want some feedback. What do you think I do well and what can I improve on.
Stuff like should I bundle all the daily life into one long chapter or split them up like Ive been doing.
Just any feedback is nice.
To update my life. Im in highschool now so thats cool. I dont do youtube anymore. Im really tall now so im happy.
I do write other books! On my page you can see a bfb post split my way/randomized. If you could go read it as with the 3/4 books ive started/ will start its gonna be the only lighthearted one really so please appreciate it!
I also have a book called the end of us (may not be the final title) which I havent planned much but who dies when and the main characters and main villians.
Also yes I still plan to make this book atleast a trilogy. I may go far enough to get every bfb contestant in one of these books (idk about the debuters) I have played around and could make about 7-8 books. But that all depends on when I start getting bored.
ALSO. I may start doing like little side arts but it wont be digital. I doodle alot in every class to get ideas for books so I have a few Id show yall!
Thats really all. Im working on a chapter or two for the bfb my way before updating this book again. So Ill see yall soon!
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