welcome (read it please)

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Hello wattpad,

My native language isn't English, which may cause mistakes in my writing, but I tried my best. If you find any mistakes, feel free to tell me, I'm opened to advice.

I am aware that my previous books, well, suck, so I really tried to put more effort into this one. However, this is my first time writing in third point of view, and I actually rewrote the whole story because I wrote it in my main character's p.o.v. at first, so if you notice anything I left in from that, let me know.

Also, I judged the characters' age by their looks in the movie (I know their ages in the books are different, but this story is based on the movie), so:
Lucy - 15
Edmund - 17
Eustace - 13
Caspian - in his mid-twenties (not that important in my book)

I don't own the gifs and videos I use, credits to their owners and artists.

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