This story really started it all for me and writing. I was in 8th grade when I wrote this book and I didn't know what to expect from it.My grammar was awful from the jump.It bothers me to this day I want to fix it but I'm too lazy and I do a lot during the day. I wrote it when I was 13 and now since I'm 17 and reading my books it's really showing me how much I've grown.
This story could have ended better.
I could have gave her a happy ending.
Sarabi and Joey could be together.
I felt that she is a unique person to write about for a reason. So, why not give her an ending that leaves questions? Who exactly knows.
Sarabi represents the person that I want to be. Strong, comfortable, and smart. She has her insecurities but she didn't let anything show. That's something that I lack.
Joey represents boys who simply haven't grown into men. They still have people make their decisions for them and I feel that is what happen at the end. He got manipulated.
Paul is a representation of my unreasonable side but I just made him 10x worse.
Her Father (Jordan) and Melissa represents my demons anger, depression, self-esteem, and other things that eat away at me.
Victoria is simply victory. She comes and goes just like happiness.
Those are just some major characters that I put in the books. I think this was a good book and I hope you guys did too.
Love Y'all and read some of my other books outside the series.
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Plus Size Punch
Teen FictionSarabi is a plus size black girl who doesn't talk to anyone but has a good built wall between her and society and her father. She rather be alone than be hurt. Joey Moretii is the boy that all the girls fall for. He has made plenty of rounds but whe...
