~Few important details~

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This story starts from the time when Aryan was shot and Imlie was blamed by Narmada (unreasonably).

[The writers literally butchered Narmada's character during those episodes. I mean the sweet and caring mother suddenly became the typical mother in law under the influence of outsiders. How is this justified?

Narmada was literally forcing Imlie to do all those superstitious rituals so that she can conceive and also threatened her to leave Aryan. I mean how can she change so much all of a sudden?

And then she again became caring and gentle when she came to know that Imlie was expecting, also Imlie and Aryan forgot everything she did, so easily. That is so ridiculous].

I didn't like that plot at all.
This story starts from the point where Aryan is discharged from the hospital and they have returned home.
Narmada asks Imlie to quit Bhaskar Times but Aryan reprimands her.

Few changes from the original plot:

1. Imlie was 20 years old when she was married off to Aditya and she has suffered for almost 2 years in Tripathi Nivas. So now in this story, she is in her early twenties. (I didn't want her to be a teenager and facing all those atrocities at that tender age. So this small change).

2. Jyoti is not a pathetic villain here. I mean Aryan deserves atleast one good friend. Also she is happily married.

3. Aryan Singh Rathore is 27 years old and attends his other offices also. In the show it is shown that he is always in Bhaskar Times and that is so absurd.

Rathore Group of Companies specialise in Hospitality Industries, Construction and Interior designing.

4. I also don't like what, most of the times ITV shows, like the main leads confess their feelings for each other and consummate their relationship immediately.
So, I want that Imlie and Aryan court each other (though, after their marriage😁) .

5. Sundar, here has already completed his Hotel Management course and works as a chef in a good restaurant.

[ Updates may not be regular since I'm writing a story for the first time and it takes time for me to formulate my thoughts into words.
Very much in need of your support and cooperation... ]

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