A/N
How would you guys feel if I changed
Winter's name into something like:
Noelle Hunter, Holly Hunter,
Holiday Hunter, Icyln Hunter or
January Hunter?
Idk, just brain storming. I feel like Winter Hunter sounds like a real bad superhero. It doesn't roll off the tongue and it's like super clunky. But if I change it, I still want it to be a winter inspired name. Thinking about changing the title of the book. I started this book when I was in middle school, I'm currently in college (omg time flies by). Re-reading it makes me realize Plot Holes and how cringing some of the writing is.
I don't want to abandon the project, but I do want to renovate it, make it better. I love the characters in the book, and I want to strive for more diversity. I feel like I'm not including most of the things I originally set for the characters. Like:
•Brendon and Winter's dance partnership
•Casey Huckabee being on the autism spectrum
•Brendon Bender having an inferiority complex due to his older brother
•the whole Huckabee dynamic with their absent father
•Shawn Hunter's fear of being a horrible father
•MICHAEL TURNER'S WHOLE TRAUMA LITERALLY SEEING IS FOSTER SISTER HALF DEAD
Like I had so much going on for this fanfic, and then just forgot about it. I want to hear some feedback, but be nice. I like criticism, but if you're going to leave hateful comments just move on.
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