Need Help!!!

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Hey guys, I have written the next chapter for this story but I am not liking it. The feelings are not coming across with the dialogues. Can anyone help me to edit the chapter or rewrite the screenplay.

Please please please...if anyone can help even a pinch..please do not hesitate and drop me a message or comment.

Thanks in advance!!!

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