Leona Baggins lives with her older brother Bilbo in the peaceful rolling hills of the Shire - that peace is short-lived when a wizard and a group of chaotic dwarves seek them out for an adventure of a lifetime.
- #2 in 'hobbit' [1/10/21]
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^ me finding all my grammar errors ^
Thank you so much for all the support I've received so far! Ya'll sweet though ;)
So...the way I do my editing is jank. I write so fast to get everything out of my head that I make a lot of errors - as I'm sure many of you have already seen. Once I finish the chapters, I post them and re-read them later to correct the errors best I can. So! Editing will be an ongoing thing throughout this story (this is why I'm a nurse, not an English major).
I'm potentially toying with the idea of changing the title to something relevant to the plot - maybe something to do with shepherd? Idk.
Side notes: I feel like I'm not giving Leo enough attention and a way to develop because I'm focusing way too much on keeping it in line with the movie. For now, I'll try to focus less on the rest of the characters' development/dialogue and try to really focus on Leo (and Fili, duh). I may try to throw in some of Leo's POV so I can really get in her head ya' know.
