Countryhumans oneshot

Ashes oneshot review:

The Ashes oneshot was written by: Bluebunny2017

And I am here to give it an honest review :)
(Also I probably will have the worst grammar in the world while reviewing but English is my third language.. ANYWAY..)

Small little thing I will put in screenshots of the text and then how I think it is and stuff like that

Alrighty let's start:

First of all, I really liked how you put in a good starter plot before getting into the good stuff.. for example:

Usually the start to any situation or plot or anything like that is really short or just extremely boring and plain. It's like toast with nothing or a empty room, but this starter plot was written was actually extremely impressive and kept me reading when I usually just skip the start to get to the middle.

Here is another part I took a quick screenshot of;
You can see the first three sentences which were said by America and Japan.

While usually most boring books make America an ignorant, overconfident or rude guy, you made America built different here. Instead of how usual authors write America as a rude person with the possibly world's worst personality, America here was written more polite which is actually something good to read, something more special

It's also really cool how America could remember what happened and his perspective.
"I remember how every night, I would read you a Superman comic" sounded so nostalgic and then there was also something that good mix of
'When we took you back to the base...' part which was really just PERFECTO