Name: Jiper oneshots
Author jiper25
Genre: Fanfiction
Rating: I give this book a 4/10 I like the one shots. But I felt like the plot in everyone shot is rush for example: At parts where PIper is mad or afraid of Jason Jason says One thing and she not mad at him any more.
Space out the plot more so it is not so rushed and try to be more descriptive. In times you have 4 words sentence which you should try to be more descriptive.
Finally you endings are plain example: They lived happily ever after. Try to explain it more make it more emotion and happy.
Cover: I give it also a 4/10 considering it is a Jiper one shot book You should have Jiper on it.
But besides the rating I give this book I recommend it for anyone who likes Jiper and enjoys little one shots about them.
I hope you are not upset about the rating I gave you and you can always re enter you story when you feel like it got better and I will re review it.
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