The Finale Chapter

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                       Title: The FInale Chapter 

                       Genre: Fanfiction

                        Author: ThatFangirl923

                              Rating I give this book a 3/10 I think you need to use more descriptive writing you sentences are rushes. Remember everytime someone talks,the topic changes, or the setting changes add a paragraphs so it is not all bunched up.So there was a prophecy in the begging but there is no quest right after you like forget about the quest then it comes about again like 12 chapters later.

                          Cover: 4/10 because the cover doesn't stand out if I seen it I would think the story was bad because we all judge a book by it's cover.

                            

                  

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