Many times I feel like I really need someone to give me some constructive criticism so that I can find out what to improve to make my book better.
This is one of those books where you can enter your own book, and I'll do a review of it.
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I reviewed this book once a LONG time ago so the author has asked me to review it again to see if it has improved so let's compare.
Old review: Rating: I give this book a 9/10 I really like the plot and I like how it's structured just add paragraphs on a few of the girl's chapters.
Cover: I give the cover a 6/10 becuase it a rose with words so it doesn't really match the plot a lot.
I recommend this book to Pjo and HOO Fans because is a really good book.
I sucked at making reviews 4 months ago to be honest.
This is so bad I didn't even use correct grammar look at the because is a really good book. It should be because it is a really good book.
Anyway I was going easy on you because I didn't want to hurt anyone's feelings. But i'm over that crap. So here is a honest review of We all have pain.
Cover:
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I rate this cover a 9/10 it's nice. I like all the different themes going on. I especially love the rain sparkle stuff in the back and the lighting effect around the border.
Description:
Percy is abused
Hazel mom is an alcoholic
Leo doesn't want to be here
Piper is ignored
Frank's mom recently died
Annabeth is mute
Reyna has no family
Jason is in debt and his mom is dying
I rate this description a 7/10. Which people is GOOD. In this cover you get straight to the point. But maybe you should have something before this.
For example: Who ever said life was perfect? Whoever said people go home to the happiest families? How do you know they really do? How can you judge without knowing?
