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I rate this cover a 10/10.
I really like it. It has everything a cover should have and it relates to the plot and story. Your cover also looks very nice.
Your cover really justs pops. I look at it as i'm scrolling through stories and my eyes immediately go to it. This is the main job of a cover. Other than being the face of the book.
I extremely like how nothing on your cover is cut off because it doesn't fit. Your cover fits perfectly and I can see everything.
Description:
Jace, Carter, West, Ansel, and Greyson are all regular teen guys. Of course, regular teen guys who happen to be part of America's most loved boy band, The All American Boys.
But what happens when the lead singer, Jace Holzer, pulls a random girl into his limo? One where he has no idea who she is, or what her intentions might be?
This story is a five part series, told from each band member's point of view.Jace- The All American BoysWest- Mr. DaydreamGreyson- The Guitar, Girl, and my Dorky Sweater Ansel- AmethystCarter- To Be Announced
I rate this description a 10/10. I really enjoyed reading it. Your description is not to long and not to short. I love how you included all the titles to the upcoming books. It really made me excited for the other books to come out.
I like that you explained what the story is going to be about. You really pulled me in and excited me to read further into the story. Which the the descriptions job.
Overall, I loved the words you used or shall I say the phrases.It really makes the book look mature and very real. If though I haven't read it yet. My favorite part is one of the last paragraphs.
"But what happens when the lead singer, Jace Holzer, pulls a random girl into his limo? One where he has no idea who she is, or what her intentions might be?"
I just really like how the this paragraph is written.
Book rating: I rate this book a 10/10.
I really liked how your book was written. To me it felt like I was actually reading a novel I would get off a bookstore shelf. Many people when they write write at their age level but your writing skills are amazing. Off the charts really.
I special loved how you didn't rush the connection between Jace and Hadley or how they met. Many people's books would have them meeting then boom I love you's are sprew (is this a word?) out 2 minutes later. When authors rush the connections I immediately dock off points because it's not realistic at all. But thankfully, you didn't rush the connection at all I can tell that Hadley is slowly falling in love with Jace.
I only saw maybe 1 or 2 spelling/ grammar mistakes but they are barely noticeable and I had a hard time finding them.
I already have a favorite character in only 2 chapters. I really like Ansel. Like i'm emotionally connected.
I always seem to get really attached to the sad, quiet, and sensitive characters because I just want them to find someone and be happy. I kinda hope that Ansel turns out gay and dates a really upbeat kind of guy and they're really cute together because their opposites like Magnus and Alec from the Mortal Instruments.
Your writing is so good that i've only read two chapters and i'm already starting to ship a character that has only 2 sentences with a made up non-existent guy.
I lowkey recommend your book to everyone.
Guys its really good just click this -> -> -> idiocracy_ and find her book titled All American boys read it love it.
Then read her other books especially paradox because i've read that book also and i'm so in love.
Overall, I love this book and i'm definitely going to keep it in my library and read it.
