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Cover: I rate this cover a 10/10 the detail in this cover is amazing. I love the fonts that this cover has. My favorite thing in covers is when author have something else in the cover beside name and who it's by. Example: Far bottom right of your cover. _____ ______ ____ Never fade.
Even though I can't read the beginning of it , I still love seeing it there. I thinks it's cool and just looks amazhang on your cover.
I love the misty background you also have. Your cover has fog, shadows, and MIST. Your cover is just completely amazing. I also love how the man on the front seems to pop out of the cover. While the building in the back seems to shrink into the page.
Description:In the ruffled, unruly remains of the mysterious city the new building blocks of the government try to take forth their territory.
Bred and born are the rebels, striking back harshly. The most famous gang being the Ravagers. What happens when they are hunted by a scientist's project called Legendaries? Created from soldiers or captured rebels, they are powerful, advanced, and made for the battle.
Keane Garine wakes up in the desert borderlines of his reckless home only to find he can't recall anything from his past. The most important is whether he was a Legendary or a Ravager.
The one thing he can remember though is the girl he loves and struggles so hard to protect.
I rate this description a 7/10. It's short but interesting. Some author tend to write descriptions similar to a chapter. Which to be honest I skip right to the story. You were able to tell us everything e needed to know to understand the story.
But besides doing just that you also tell us some backstory about the main character without revealing the whole story. When I read your description I was so intrigued I couldn't wait to start reading.
Rating: I rate this story a 8/10 which is really good. There were only a few chapters so I couldn't review much but it was still a very good story. I read some of your comments like I always do and I seen this one.
They said," I love how you begin your story very descriptively. I like when authors do this because it creates a good setting of the plot and the characters. You get to know the characters without the book really starting without making it cheap and unappealing. This first chapter definitely kept my attention and I honestly believe that this introduction is one of the hardest to do whilst keeping an audience. I can't wait to read on!"
I completely agree.
Your story was so descriptive there were only 3 chapters and I felt like I was watching a movie in my mind! I was so intrigued to find out who the girl was that he hallucinated in the desert.
I can't wait to know more about the main character. I can't wait for you to unfold his past. Each new character that you just introduced I feel like I've know for my whole life. You are really good at describing characters and their characteristics.
One thing to work on: I couldn't really find anything. At all. So I'll just remind you basic things you should do as a author. I seen everything I'm going to tell so you can just ignore this part.
Remember to review your works. Re read every chapter before you publish it and after. WHich helps keep writing mistakes from staying hidden.
I think i'll keep this story in my library.
I recommend Ravage to whoever likes story about adventure with a tad bit mystery. Even if you don't particularly like this genre give this book a chance.
