Title: Abandoned Genre: FanfictionAuthor: Jason_Grace2
Rating: I give this book a 7/10 because there are no paragraphs so it looks all bunched up int he beginner remember to make a paragraph every time someone talks, the setting changes, and a topic changes. Later on there are paragraphs so that is good. Zeus is spelled zeus not zues so you might want to fix those.
SPOILERS AHEAD: This book was like a lot of chaos books in the beginning Percy brother steals all the glory every one believes him in the big three show up and yell at Percy. I would try to find ideas where no one has them so it is original.
Cover: I give this cover a 7/10 Like I said before I like busy covers and this one is plain but is a good cover because it is Percy alone on a beach and goes good with the title and the story.
This is my opinion so don't feel bad just do paragraphs and it would be a better score find more original ideas and it would be a 9/10 nothing to do with you writing.
I recommend this book if you like a good laugh because it has humor and if you like PJO and HOO chaos stories.
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Also you can always re enter a book if you feel like you've improved and I will re-read it.
I actually had feels attacks in this book so this book is awesome GO READ IT.
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