Many times I feel like I really need someone to give me some constructive criticism so that I can find out what to improve to make my book better.
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Cover rating: I rate this cover a 10/10 it's really beautiful. I love how you used different fonts, and how the picture of Reyna, is missing some parts. I really enjoy looking at the cover, and seeing how some of the the background is white, while other parts are a tiny shape filled with different color.
I feel that looks really good on the cover itself. I feel like your background is perfect just being white because your picture of Reyna, and the fonts you used are so big and bold, that if there was something on the background, the cover would be to busy and bold for my liking.
Description:
A Partial AU in which Percy and Jason weren't chosen for Hera's "exchange" but Annabeth and Reyna.
Description rating: I rate this description a 4/10 I feel like it could be better. I feel like it could also be longer. Your description is one sentence that just tells what's going to happen. That's what description are supposed to have. Which is why I gave you a 4/10
But, I feel like with your awesome writing skills you could have wrote about 5 sentences or a tiny paragraph telling what the story's about. What's happening in the story as soon as they hit read.
The descriptions niche (job) is to catch the reader and attract them to you book. So you want to make sure your description is the best thing in your book.
TItle rating: 10/10 it's basically the same title of the lost hero book which you're basing this story off of, I liked the title of the lost hero so I like the title of your book.
Book rating: I rate this book a 9/10. I love this book the only reason I gave your book a rating of 9/10 is that this book is not my favorite type of book. It's not the genre I would usually read that much anymore so I can't rate a story 10/10 if it's not one of the best stories I have ever read.
To be on the list of best stories I have ever read, all books on the list will have to be my favorite genre or I won't enjoy them as much which is the case with your story.
You book is really good I did not see one spelling, or grammar mistake which I'm not that good at myself but I did not see anything.
My favorite thing in your story is before every new chapter you have a little snippet which is only usually 1 sentence It's makes me so exictied to read on. Which is probable the sam edeal with other readers.
That is my favorite thing ever. I love when authors do that like in The Mortal Instuments Cassandra Clare did the same thing. Even Marisa Myer did thje same thing in the Lunar Chonicles .
I feel like you did a amazing job conturibted to this story. You kept the same plot as the Lot Heronie but you made it your own in a unquie way authors on here that write books like those can't do for the life of them .
Something to fix: I would take time to foucus on writing a 10/10 description.
Remeber to always: Alwaysremember to re-read you chapter before you publish it and after to find mistakes you may have missed the first time. If you do this which you probaly already do your chapters will make more sense.
I recommend The Lost Heroine to whoever has read PJO and HOO.
You will love this story if you have ever read PJO and HOO because it's a twist on thr Lost hero like what if __________________.
The what if stories are some of my favorite so make sure to go read The lost heronie by AsiaMoonfield.
YOU WON'T REGRET IT
I PROMISE YOU
SHE'S A AWESOME WRITING AND SHE MAKES THE BEST FREAKING COVERS ON EARTH!!!!!!!!!1
It's me. I'm back for more book reviews since I have about 80 to do . . . ha ha ha my life sucks. Anyways schools over in 8 days not counting week ends.
I had a dream with the best book idea ever so look for that some time soon. It was a nightmare so that book not for kiddos i'm warnign you.
Bye I got to start reading the next book on my review list.
Bye,
Percabethsdaughter61
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