Many times I feel like I really need someone to give me some constructive criticism so that I can find out what to improve to make my book better.
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Cover rating:
I rate this cover a 10/10 I can not even imagine this book having a different cover than the one you have now. There is only 1 thing on this cover but it looks so amazing. I love how the skull is very artistic with it kind of bleeding black ink down the cover. I really like that.
I also like that your cover has the title of your book on it I can't stand when the name of the book is not on the cover.
The last thing I enjoyed about your cover was the font it looks really clean and elegant and I love that.
Description:
Therians are man eating creatures who's appearance is that of a normal human being...except for the animal ears on their head and the tail above their hips. Only, they've managed a way to hide those features that stick out. The news and the well known CTA describe them as horrendous monsters but are they really what people assume they are?
August Whitelock is an odd girl who after three years of shutting herself out of the outside world, decides to finally take a step out of her house. What does this include? Going to school of course. So goodbye convenient online food, Internet, and video games for seven hours. However, because of her isolation, she often creates awkward and embarrassing experiences. It doesn't help that August also has a unique obsession over the Therians people fear and despise. But what happens when on her first day of school, she's befriended by an interesting group of three who are hiding quite a few secrets? One secret including furry ears and tails. "Things aren't always what they seem. You must look closely and they just might surprise you."-unknown
Description rating: I rate this description a 10/10, I really enjoy it. While I read I can not spot anything I think you can change. I also love the idea of your story and how you incorporated it into your description. You have amazing writing skills. Please never stop writing.
I love how you made your description very long and full of details that is what a description should look like.
You describe August so well in the description I loved her character before I even read the first chapter of your story that is how good you wrote her.
Book rating: I rate this book a 9/10. I really enjoyed the plot and the way the book was going. My favorite character has to be Alex because he reminds me of Alec from The Mortal Instruments. I really like how Luke and Bree relationship is going and I'm totally hoping they get together in the end.
I love Bree's character and how she is always threaten to hurt the boys. I love how August is so curious and doesn't care how other people see therians.
I am so excited to read more about Alex past with his mom and all. I kinda ship him and August but I don't know if it would work out.
My favorite part: Had to be when Alex and August were supposed to be studying but instead they took a break and played video games then when Alex kept on winning August said something, and ALEX SMILED I was literally so happy he's my favorite character and I love his grumpiness but I also just want to see him happy, and August seems to help him achieve that happiness. So I can't wait to see what happens next.
Flashbacks are also something I enjoy I like seeing all of them happy before everything went bad.
One thing to work on: One thing to work on . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I actually can't find anything to correct you on. So uh, . . . . always remember to re-read you chapter before you publish it and after to find mistakes you may have missed the first time.
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Also the next person to get their book reviewed was supposed to be The Best Kind Of Awful by imatoaster but I think she may have changed the title Idk and she not activate on wattpad anymore so i'm going to wait till she replies back to me.
So the next book to get reviewed is Why us? A ( PJO ) fic by crazychic93 who is also not activate for the past 4ish 5 months but i'm still going to review it anyway.
