Name: Rowena Saewald and the Olympians: The Caged Heroes
Genre: Fanfiction(Percy Jackson)
Author: vanillahummingbird
Cover: 5/10 It's a little plain. When I look at it it does not really catch my eye enough to interest me of what lays inside.
Rating:2/10 don't take this the wrong way. But you had many spelling errors that were easy to pick out.
The names of your characters are very powerful. BUt not really in a good way. Since your characters have so many parts of their name. The readers get confused of who someone is talking about when someone calla a character by it's real name, nickname, middle, last, etc.
Next time you think of a character's name try to keep it simply yet unique.
Run on sentences where another thing I noticed while reading your story. Even if the reader is not reading your story out loud they still noticed if there is a run on sentences. It also does not look pretty in a story.
Try to add periods and commas.
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