Title: War Never Ends
Genre: fanfiction (Percy Jackson)
Author: bookgodesss
Cover: I rate this cover a 7/10. Meaning I like but it's not that appealing. People always judge a book by it's cover. So you want to always add detail to your cover. So they will find it very interesting.On your cover you should think about adding your name with the title of your book.
That is also a element of your cover that is eye dropping. Try to include more of the seven on your cover since the book isn't just about Annabeth and Percy.
Book: I rate this book a 8/10 also meaning YUS! as mentioned on the form. The only things you should consider looking into is your spelling and grammar. Like where certain commas go. Or correct spelling is also something I noticed. Nothing serious just a mistake from typing to fast.
Try re-reading a part of your story before you publish making sure parts you thought were good in your head sound right. Also making sure they make sense.
Feel free to PM if you need help editing with things making sense, periods, capitals, and where commas go. If you are uncertain.
Besides a few grammar and spelling problems this was a really great book.
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