Title: Unworthy
Genre: Science Fiction
Author:
Cover: I rate this cover a 7/10 it's really nice just a little plain try to get something else going on in that picture to make it less simple. But other that a lack of detail I like the cover it;s nice and relates to the main character so much.
Rating: I rate this story a 9/10 this story will become falbous when the plot and storyline starts to unfold. Try to give the readers hints of the plot and storyline of the book because so far it's hard to tell if there is even a plot. To keep readers hooked try to make a cliff hanger ending of chapters instead of making something exciting then showing that they are alright in the end. Save that part for the next chapter.
Example: Then we were surrounded.
Leave that sentence for the last of the chapter then the next chapter explain how they got out. It keeps the reader more interested.
But other then that I really like the way you wrote your story it has a mysterious plot. Translation: You don't reveal to much of each charter you keep them mysterious. which leaves the reader intrigued.
ESTÁS LEYENDO
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