Title: GIrl with the bleeding knifes
Genre: Fanficton
Author: Clovegranger
Rating I give this book a rating of 8/10. I think that you have a good plot and you know what going to happen.But I feel like you are struggling to put it all together in words.
Just to help try to think about what you want to happen next. Then just brainstorm on the chapter. When you feel like you are done. Read it out loud. Does it make sense? What can you add?
Trust me then you will have a perfect chapter it may help you I know it helps me write.
Some paragraphs and ideas in the 2 chapters are a little plain. Meaning they don't have a lot of detail so try to have more descriptive words. Also try to write more Adjectives to describe something better.
Cover: I give this cover a rating of 9/10 it is just a eye catching cover. I think it is because if you look at it it is just beautiful.
If you have any questions about this review feel free to PM me.
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