Title: Hope
Genre: Fanfiction (PJO)
Author vpau7342
Cover: 7/10 It's a nice cover it has the title and author I like it. It's plain and simple nothing to big and nothing to small for a cover.
Rating: 3/10 The story starts off like any other story that people use the idea from. Percy suddenly has a new brother that either kills Percy or starts dating Annabeth. Try to think of something no one else has ever seen before.
Like last line of the first chapter Percy dies and tell Annabeth I love you then the world goes black make it more detailed.
Example: I looked up at the woman I loved it was a honor for her to be the last thing I saw. I uttered out 3 single words that broke my heart when she started sobbing.
" I love you . . ."
Try to think of something no one else has ever seen before it will make the story more interesting because people don't know how the story will end so it keeps them reading.
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