Title: Interdimensional
Genre: Fanfiction
Author: demonic_wolf
Rating 1/10 You need to start using capital letters. The whole story line is just really confusing. So I would go back to the first chapter and start editing.Use a capital letter for a noun person name a place or a thing. Try to not change topic every 3 seconds because it gets really confusing.
Cover: 1/10 The cover does not go with the story and is really plain.
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