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I rate this cover a 8/10.
The cover is really good and has everything a cover should. The only downside about this cover is it is really good just when I stare at it nothing pops or stands out to me. Without that "pop" i'm not interested to dive right into the story.
A successful cover main job is to grab a reader and suck them in. Your cover is just not doing that too me.
I like all the different fonts that are used in the cover. I also like that all of the cover fits and there is nothing being cut off.
Description:
After saving her school from a New Year's Eve crime, Savannah is now given a masters mission to prove her skills at the Jameson Adams preparatory school for spies.
Since she arrived in Washington for her new mission, Savannah is having a hard time handling it for five reasons.
1. The criminals escaped with the stolen goods.
2. She saved the First Lady from an assassination attempt.
3. She is known as the girl who "saved the world" although it doesn't feel like much.
4. Her school is considering dropping her from the program.
5. The presidents son, Adrian might just be in love with her.
I rate this cover a 9.5/10 it's good. It's short and sweet but it gets to the point. which most descriptions don't do. In a few small paragraphs you have gotten me hooked and wanting to read.
The part with the "list" is my favorite part of the description. It really hooked me in. You give like a short list of things that will happen in the story and what the story will revolve around. That part really got me excited to read.
Not many people make a description the way you did. The form of your description with the list and everything is really good.
This is why I rated your description the way I rated it.
I rate this story a 9.8/10.
This story was beautiful written. Like VERY well done. The reason I kinda cut you of a 10 is that your story is amazing in all but while I was reading it to me it felt more like a chore to have to read the story. I love it.
The story just didn't shake me by the shoulders and make me want to reread it and quote it every 5 seconds.
A story should make you want to reread it and quote it.
I love how action packed your story is. It really drawed me in and encouraged me to read more.
In one of the first few chapters one of Savannah's body guards called her Sav. This body guard had literally just met her and is already calling her a nickname. It was a little bit out of character.
I like the storyline of her breaking up with Vincent because he was a distraction but that then brings me to wonder. If Vincent was a distraction when nothing big was happening. How will Adrian not be a distraction when the mission is huge and actually had Adrian's family deeply involved.
Adrian is a very well written character and I can't wait to read more about him. I can't wait to dive right into Adrian's character personal. I can't wait to really find out who he is.
I can't wait to find out why someone wanted to kill the first lady and not the president.
Your writing skills really makes me feel involved and a part of your story not many authors on Wattpad can do that.
This story is so nicely written I feel like it is a real book I can get off a shelf and a funny nicely written book at the same time.
Overall, I enjoyed your story and recommend it to anyone.
