Title: Shadowborn
Genre: Fantasy Author: Sarahsnothere
Cover: I give the cover a 7/10 it relates to the story to a point. It is a little plain but other wise very nice.
Title: I give the title a 8/10 it relates to the story very well it is short and unique. I really like how you used you title to fit into the book.
Review:
I really liked the book I only seen at least 1 spelling or grammar problem. 1 thing I think you need to work on is your battle scenes. What I mean is I noticed even in the first chapter when the main character created the shadow world she had created. She then willed shadow glass and a man formed. She then fought the man. The scene was a little dull. So try to use more descriptive writing for those scene and try to capture what is going on in the fight though words.
Example: "He attacked and I parried, and then twisted the sword out of his hand in one smooth movement. Another sword materialized in his hands and he charged again, this time putting up somewhat of a fight."
Try adding some descriptive words to describe the fight more fiercely keeping the reader more interested in the fight wanting more.
Rating: I give this book a 9/10 this is a book I would highly recommend.
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