Title: Mat's Mask
Genre: Teen fanfiction
Author: DiscardedMarionette
Rating: I give this book a 7/10. I give this book a 7/10 because at some parts I see some grammar and a few spelling mistakes which brought you down to a 9/10.
Some parts in the story are left untold which confused the reading when you switch from one thing to the other without filling in more of the details. Which brings you down to a 8/10.
Lastly to get you to your rate of 7/10. I noticed that you need more descriptive words that keep people interested instead of words that people read a lot. The story gets un interesting if you countie to do the same writing words.
Cover: I give the cover a 6/10. It's a little dull and plain. Not really eye catching .
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