Many times I feel like I really need someone to give me some constructive criticism so that I can find out what to improve to make my book better.
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Cover: I rate your'e cover a 7/10 which is amazing. I like to imagine that your cover for this story is abstract. Meaning I feel like you could look at the cover before you even read the story like a image. But then once you read it. You see it a different way. I personally see it as Nate trapped in a cage. But not a real one. The cage is his responsibility and his mind. I just love looking at your cover and thinking, " This is his feelings showing . . ." Or, " It's a beautiful cover this image is just pretty. Or finally whatever you want it to be.
Description:
"For ten years Evelyn and Nate have been inseparable, they understood each other in a way no one else could. They were everything to each other despite their different social statuses. They could understand each other without words.
But is that really true? Can you ever truly understand another person? And is it still possible to love a person when the ten years you spent together were nothing but lies?
When he was eight Nate's parents insisted he got a slave, as a vampire of royal bloodline he was expected to have one, it was a symbol of status.
But the relationship between young Nate and his slave Evelyn is anything but ordinary, the siren bought to be his friend has an unusual condition - she is mute.
Nate felt feelings for her since he first met her, and ten years later he knows he loves her, but he doesn't know how she feels about him... Because after all these years she's never said a single word.
The songbird was broken."
I rate this description a 8/10 it catches an intrested to whoever likes these types of stories. While I was reading the book you surprised me with all your different plot twists that I never seen coming I had to do a double take.
In the description you have one word is there that I completely skip over so when you revealed who she was. I was completely surprised but now that I re-read the description you told us all along. I like that you did that.
Rating: I rate you book a 9/10 which is amazing. I just love how you constructed your story. You made the details that would later uncover plot twist sneaky. You wrote it so well that you told us every single plot twist with words. It was staring at us straight in the face and we didn't even notice. We just had to read between the very hidden lines.
I also read some of your comments. Someone commented on one of your chapters and I completely agree.
They said, " It makes me happy to see that him and his mom have a really good relationship. I feel like so many wattpad books now are about characters who hate their parents for no real reason and I feel like it's become really mainstream (sadly) for people to hate their parents, but I feel like family and having good a good relationship with your family is really important (unless something specific happened that gives you reason not to)."
I completely agree your story passes my test one hundred percent. I hardly found spelling or grammer mistakes your story was interesting. The plot twist kept me on edge every time you sprouted one out.
One thing I think you might need to work on is trying not to sprout out more than one plot twist at a time. In one of your chapters you revealed that huge plot twist then about one or more chapters later you had another one. For me personally it was hard to keep track of the new information we kept on receiving.
Try to make some space in between your plot twist so we have time to process the information. Other then that one simple thing. I loved your story and I recommend it to everyone!!!!!
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Percabethsdaughter61
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