The Surprise (Part Three)

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97: INT. PRIVATE JET DAY FADE IN:

The next day. Brian and Rachael are heading to LA.

ROGER: Where are we going again?

BRIAN: Los Angeles.

ROGER: (nods and lights a cigarette)

RACHAEL: (looks up at him) You want some tea honey?

BRIAN: No, I'm alright love. By the way, how come you weren't this worried the first time I got sick?

RACHAEL: Hey, I was just as worried then as I am now, but last time, you actually went to the hospital, you won't go back this time and I don't like that.

BRIAN: Darling, I'm fine. I told you, we went and they gave me antibiotics.

RACHAEL: Well that still doesn't change the fact that you could hardly keep anything down last night.

BRIAN: (glares at Roger) Rog, you told her?

ROGER: It's not my fault mate! She threatened to break my favorite drumsticks!

BRIAN: You're a bloody idiot.

RACHAEL: You're both idiots!

BRIAN: Listen, I'm sorry darling, I just didn't want you to worry. Do you forgive me? (gives her a sad puppy look)

RACHAEL: (sighs) Yes. (kisses him passionately)

ROGER: Oy! Get a bloody room!

RACHAEL: (flips him off)

BRIAN: Well, now that that's out of the way, are you ready for your next hint for tonight?

RACHAEL: Yes!

BRIAN: Purple.

RACHAEL: (looks at him confused) Purple? Purple what?

BRIAN: That's all I'm going to say, it's a person and they're linked to the colour purple. If I say anything more, you'll know who it is.

RACHAEL: Well, ok. (rests her head on his shoulder)

BRIAN: I meant to ask you last night darling, what was it like to sing with Neil Sedaka?

RACHAEL: It was incredible!!!

BRIAN: (smiles down at her) I'm glad you had a good time love. (coughs)

RACHAEL: Are you gonna be alright for the show tonight?

BRIAN: (strokes her hair) Yes love. (kisses her)

RACHAEL: Ok.

BRIAN: What do you say I take you to dinner tonight? Just you and me.

RACHAEL: (smiles) I'd like that.

98: INT. RESTAURANT NIGHT DISSOLVE TO:

Brian takes Rachael out to dinner.

BRIAN: Cheers! (both tap their glasses together)

RACHAEL: (sips her drink)

BRIAN: You look absolutely gorgeous tonight darling.

RACHAEL: (blushes shyly) You're so sweet.

BRIAN: (smiles)

RACHAEL: You look great tonight too.

BRIAN: Oh please darling, I probably look like shit.

RACHAEL: No! You look good! A lot better than yesterday. How do you feel?

BRIAN: Eh, better I suppose.

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