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Author: yourpapergirl Story: Moonstruck Island Critic: VEEutiful Critique Released: April 9, 2020 Parts Read: 10 parts Book Status: On going Genre: Fantasy-Adventure
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Interesting, intriguing and unique. Madali rin itong maalala dahil simple lang pero nakakaakit. Unang tingin pa lang din masasabi nang fantasy na ito.
BOOK COVER 🌕🌕🌕🌕🌖
Simple yet fitting. Makikita na kasi roon 'yong main element ng story which is the moon, plus the red background also fits their colors (naisip ko 'yong Crimson Wolves lol). Upon further reading tho, napansin kong ang daming nangyayari sa story kaya medyo nakukulangan na rin ako sa book cover. It's still a good cover nonetheless, but I think you can make it better, alluring and magical.
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01. Blurb Wow na wow. Bentang-benta agad sa akin ang blurb ngl. Nakalagay na kasi ro'n ang kaunting background ng story, ang conflict pati na rin ang mystery at catch ng story. I love the way you wrote the blurb at talaga namang nakakahatak ng mga mambabasa. It's perfect at wala na talaga akong mapupuna. Anyone who will read it will definitely fall in love in it as well.
2. Prologue Napaiyak ako pagkabasa ng prologue. Ang ganda ng pagkakasulat kasi e, at mahilig talaga ako sa mga gano'ng klaseng istroya. Masasabi kong amazed ako sa mga binigay na info sa Genesis pati na rin sa pagkakasulat nito. I may be subjective and biased in this part kaya pinabasa ko rin ang storya niyo sa mga kaibigan kong picky to have their insights, at lahat sila nagandahan rin. Props to you, author. Ang galing niyo!
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