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IMPORTANT NOTICE: I am not a professional writer and/or critic. My evaluation and opinion will be based on my observation. Do note that some information about the story will be redacted in order to preserve some of the story's highlights, and to not let out spoilers which will ruin other readers' reading experience.
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Author: _thrinine-blue_ Story: Disorder Critic: VEEutiful Critique Released: May 23, 2020 Parts Read: 13 parts [including prologue] Book Status: On going Genre: Mystery/Thriller
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TITLE [5%]
Strong. Isang salita lang 'yong pero malakas na ang impact. Makikita na rin agad ang relevance nito sa istorya. Unang basa pa lang rito magkakaroon ka na ng ideya kung anong magiging takbo ng istorya. Perfect na perfect ang title sa istorya kaya wala na akong masasabi pa. Perfect score!
BOOK COVER [4.5%]
I love the book cover. Nagsusumigaw na kasi ito ng mystery at thrill. It also has this eerie vibe which compliments the story's genre. Tumugma rin 'yong background picture pati na rin 'yong mga letra sa mukha at kamay ng babae. Maganda rin 'yong idea na nilagay yung title sa forehead ng character para ma-imply na mayroon siyang sakit, kaso hindi gaanong maintindihan 'yong salita dahil na rin sa font. Hindi rin mabasa nang maayos 'yong pangalan ng author dahil sa nipis at liit nito. Suggestion ko na lahikan mo ito nang kaunti, 'wag mo namang ikahiya na ikaw ang may-akda hehe jk.
BLURB/ PROLOGUE [9.5%]
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BLURB Wow na wow! Napakaganda ng pagkakagawa! Naalala ko tuloy no'ng una kayong nag-sign up dito sa critique journal namin, ang nakalagay pa na blurb ay 'yong hinihimay ang pangalan niya tapos sasabihing psychology student siya na may sakit, kaya nagulat na lang ako bigla nang naging ganito na. Big improvement I tell you! Malaman ang blurb niyo — maikli lang pero nando'n na 'yong thought and mystery ng istorya. Great job!
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