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Author: Msshell Story: The Polar Worlds of Love Critic: eiramana325 CritiqueReleased: 29 July 2020 PartsRead: 27 Book Status: On-going Genre: Historical Fiction, Fantasy, Mystery/Thriller, Romance, Teen-Fiction
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TITLE [4/5%]
Title: The Polar Worlds of Love
The title was okay but not very appealing to me. I was actually thinking of the title that will emphasize the mystery/thriller part of the story. For me, it seemed to be just another romance story wherein the lovers are in the opposite side of the world. But there’s more in the story than barely romance.
Dapat kasi title palang nakaiintriga na. Iyong tipong mapapaisip ka na kung bakit ganoon ang titulo. Ano ang meron sa istoryang ito? Eto lang ang naisip ko, The Spears of Flowers, the spears symbolized the mystery/thriller of the story while the flowers, obviously the romance into it. Malaking impact rin nito sa istorya mismo dahil mahilig sila sa bulaklak ang mga karakter.
Suhestiyon lang iyan. Nasa iyo pa rin ang pagpapasya.
BOOK COVER [3/5%]
Nang makita ko ang book cover, ang unang naisip ko na tungkol ito sa mga lobo kasi parang buwan iyong liwanag sa taas. Tapos, hindi pa gaanong mabasa ang titulo. Ang dating na dating talaga nito ay tungkol lang sa romance.
Marami kaming magagaling na editors sa HHPH, makatutulong sila sa paggawa ng book cover. Sana maipakita kahit sa book cover ang genre na mystery/thriller, like the calendar of year 2030 and 2005 or an hour glass (pero common na ito).
Kung sa The Spears of Flowers, iyong mga bulaklak tapos ang mga stems niya mga matutulis, like the spears itself.
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