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Author: Chaddy_ThePanda Story: Incursio de Immortales Critic:VEEutiful Critique Released: June 13, 2020 Parts Read: 9 parts (prologue – chapter 8) Book Status: On going Genre: Fantasy
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❝ TITLE ❞ ❬ 5% ❭
Incursio de Immortales. "Invasion of the Immortals" sa Ingles. Nakita ko na agad ang relevance nito sa istorya sa blurb pa lang kaya masasabi kong fitting na ito sa istorya. Subjectively speaking, mabilis akong na-attract sa ginamit na title dahil na rin ibang lenggwahe ang ginamit at nagsusumigaw na ito agad ng fantasy. Nakikita na rin ang magiging daloy ng istorya sa pag-translate pa lang ng titulo, so I won't any no more.
❝ BOOK COVER ❞ ❬ 5% ❭
Wow na wow! Impressive, alluring, enchanting, beautiful! Maganda ang ginamit na book cover at bumabagay sa genre ng istorya. Maganda 'yong color scheme, 'yong picture na ginamit pati na rin 'yong fonts. Very legible din 'yong mga salita sa book cover. Overall, napakaganda at very fitting!
❝ BLURB / PROLOGUE ❞ ❬ 5% ❭
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Maraming question mark ang nabuo sa ulo ko sa pagbabasa pa lang ng blurb. Para kasi sa akin ay naiintindihan ko siya, pero at the same time ay 'di ko ma-gets? Medyo magulo ito at hindi gaanong effective. Maayos naman na 'yong una at ikalawang talata ng blurb dahil na-introduce 'yong conflict, pero 'yong mga sumunod na talata, naging magulo na dahil hindi tumutugma ang mga ito.
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