The Lament-The Elements Trilogy Part 1

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Author :amitrajyoti

My review :-
I liked the concept of the story and the way it is written. A few grammatical glitches are there but I suppose they can be corrected if the author uses MS Word or any other such app. The summary is good. It neither tells too much nor too little. Good job. From the start to the end of the novel, it does not deviate from the theme. The language is good too most of the times.

Weakness :-
The first weakness I felt was the lack of clarity in some parts of the novel. The other thing that I felt was the lack of a good ending. Also there were a few grammar glitches.

My advice for all the fantasy lovers would be to once give a chance to this book. It will not disappoint.

Overall rating :7/10

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