Author :@SamTRajkumar
My review :
This book contains the modern theme of love over social networking sites. Can the love over social networking site happen? Is it successful? This is all the book is about. I would say that the theme is nice. The title is simple and crisp. No complaints here. Although I am not reading something new, but it has a feel good factor. The flow and the pace of the book is also good. The characters are genuine and the dialogues suit them. This book is realistic according to me.
Weaknesses :
First of all grammatical and punctuation errors need to be corrected. For example in the dialogues, you need to put the exclamation mark in both the person's dialogues. Paragraph also need to be made shorter and spacing needs to be done effectively. Usage of comma at right places is needed. Also it would have made the book more authentic if you had written the FB and WhatsApp conversations in a text language, in italics. More description is needed about their family backgrounds and their cultural diversity. The scenes need to be laid out better. This would have made the book more interesting
Overall rating : 5.5/10
I would like to say that the author has got the potential to do much better if he improves his shortcomings in writing
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