Author : SapneWali
My review :-
The theme on which the story is based is extremely good. I personally feel for the Nepal earthquake victims. It was a horrible natural disaster and I prayed for them. The English part is free from grammatical errors. My condolences to the victims.
Weaknesses :-
Sorry to say but the book has a lot of flaws. First flaw is that the book has very less description and more of dialogues, which kind of make it abrupt. Secondly, use of Nepali is too much. I accept that the use of a local language makes your story relatable but excessive use brings the level of story down. The level of language is quite easy and I am not satisfied with the word usage. This book could be made more effective by better words.
In all I would like to say that you have great potential to become a good writer if you work on your flaws.
Overall rating : 5/10
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