Holy fuck I'm gonna cry a river just reading the description. I am showing the amount of reads to prove a point that stories like these shouldn't be featured for any hashtag or search bar.
The beginning of the book has a character bio. As I mentioned in another rant. These are horrendous to even use. No wait. Just useless to add. It makes your character a huge ass Mary-sue.
My best rant was rank #3 for Naruto when I first published this rant book. At least it deserves the rankings to the readers can come on here and see these horrible stories.
God the entire description just screamed "I'm a fucking Mary-sue"
So you're basically power-cliffing this OC by giving her a ton of Kekkei Genkai's and then giving her a blade.
This story has no build already.
No what... let's just read the character bio first.
Name: Yuki Chikara (Yuki Strength)
Alias: Yuki Arashi (Snow Storm)
Age: 12
Current Kekkei Genkai (How she got them):
Magnet Release: She saw/befriended Gaara in Suna and he showed her, causing her kekkei genkai to copy it.
Storm Release: See's it when she was travelling
Swift Release: See's it when she was travelling
Ice Release: Born with it
Kettō no uso-tsuki: Born with it
Likes: Her blade Aisubureido (Ice blade), her twin fans, to read, Haku, Tsunade.
Dislikes: Other people (most of the time), her family, Orochimaru, Kakashi, Jiraiya, lots of other things.
Looks: she looks like the cover (Top of page picture) except her eyes are ice blue not gold.
Hobbies: Reading
Skills: Out of 10 (1-3 genin, 4-6 chunin, 7 jonin, 8 sannin, 9-10 kage)
YOU ARE READING
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