CHAPTER 65- Of Suns & Drawing Lines

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Yam-Yam's Important Note:

Sa mga readers na nakabasa ng Chapter 64 the moment I posted it, just letting you know that I made changes on that chapter. I decided to omit/ delete the part where Hell said 'Simula ngayon sa lahat ng gagawin at sasabihin ko, pwedeng-pwede ka na mainlove'. And decided to end the chapter instead only sa part na nagkiss sila and that's it.

Bakit?

I know it's a very good line na ang daming kinilig and nagcomment, but I needed to delete it kasi I realized after rereading the chapter a couple of times that Hell isn't ready to say that line. Not yet. He isn't stable enough para bitawan 'yon. It was what every part of him is thinking after they kissed, pero hindi pala n'ya nagawang sabihin 'yon kasi alam n'yang hindi pa nga s'ya stable enough. I misread him. It may be the reason why I felt so off after posting chapter 64, kasi nga may mali. May inconsistency. 

The day after posting the update, after reading the chapter for the second time, Hell's voice inside my mind kept saying na di n'ya bibitawan ang line na 'yon under those circumstances. He could possibly think about it, but he wouldn't have said it. 

So sana maintindihan n'yo mga Team Hell na nakabasa no'n why I deleted that line. Sa mga 'di inabutan ang part na 'yon, good for you. At least hindi n'yo kailangang ireset 'yung memory n'yo for chapter 64. 

I know the damage is done since ang dami nang nakabasa bago ko binago, pero kasi kung hindi ko babaguhin it will bug me so much and I would feel very off while writing the next chapters, so sana magets n'yo ang decision ko. Everything I'm doing is to make the story and your reading experience BETTER. #Ipromisenottomakethiskindoferroragainkasiitdoesntfeelnice

Anyway, you can read the next chapter now. 

P.s. This is a bit feels so you might want to prepare your hearts. LOL


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What is Love?

Love hates drawing lines so much.

Love hates drawing lines so much, it curses every time you draw them.

Love hates drawing lines so much, it devotes its life trying to make you forget how to draw lines.

Love hates drawing lines so much, if it fails in trying to make you forget how to draw lines, it will force you to erase all the lines you've ever drawn-- eventually.

Love, hates drawing lines so much.

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CHAPTER 65- Of Suns & Drawing Lines

MIKA's POV

"Hoy jerk! Hipan mo na kasi! Mamamatay na 'yung kandila o! Nangangalay na rin ako!" sigaw ni Rocket kay Ace na kanina pang nakatingin lang nang masama sa cake at kandila.

"Bakit ba kasi may blow the candle pa kayong nalalaman? Hindi ko naman birthday. I also hate cakes. And you holding that cake in front of me makes me hate the damn thing even more! Alisin mo na nga 'yan sa harap ko. Shoo bitch. Bago kita hampasin ng tsinelas." 

"E kung ikaw kaya ang hampasin ko nitong cake?!"

Minabuti na ni Ivan na kunin ang cake mula kay Rocket bago pa nga n'ya mahampas no'n  si Ace.

Ngayon, si Ivan na ang may hawak sa cake. "Ultimate Master, ako na may hawak o! Okay na? Appetizing nang tingnan ngayon di'ba? Kasi sobrang gwapo ng may hawak?" 

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