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Review #12: Timing A Runaway

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by bluecrayonlady

Dedicated to Aquinnm

by bluecrayonlady

Aquinnm

First Impression: I like the cover!

Since you only have about 3 chapters, there isn't much to say. I think you are doing well as of now, and the chapters you have posted are strong. You have a good start, great descriptions, and everything moves smoothly. Just make sure to watch your verb tense. Also, who is Matthias? Keep up the great work!

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

If you are feeling nice, I would greatly appreciate it if you give one of my stories a read, follow me, or give me a shoutout! If you enjoy making art, I would love for you to make something for me, and I will post it!

Please comment below a rating of how helpful this review was for you. (out of 5 stars) It will really help me! Thanks :)

- bluecrayonlady