Review #13: The Unspoken Words

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TripThreat

First Impression: cool idea!

I think it's great that you sharing your poems here because they are really good! I love your writing style and you convey the emotions really well. Poetry is about self-expression and how you want to expose your feelings, so there is no right way to do it. That being said, I don't have anything suggestions because they are your poems and you should write them the way you want to! I do have to say that I can't really see the words on the cover, though. 

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

If you are feeling nice, I would greatly appreciate it if you give one of my stories a read, follow me, or give me a shoutout! If you enjoy making art, I would love for you to make something for one of my stories, and I will post it!

Please comment below a rating of how helpful this review was for you! (out of 5 stars) It will really help me! Thanks :)

- bluecrayonlady 

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