First Impression: cool cover, captivating summary
WOW... I loved the first chapter. I love how you start in the middle of a scene filled with action because it sets the mood for the whole chapter. You have great descriptions and ending with a cliffhanger was great. I totally was not expecting that. There's not much to say since you only have one chapter, but if you continue writing like you did, this story will turn out great!
Overall, this story is great so far!
Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)
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- bluecrayonlady
ESTÁS LEYENDO
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