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Review #19: I'm Aurora

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by bluecrayonlady

by bluecrayonlady

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First Impression: I really like the cover!

Your introduction was amazing. Like hands down, I was speechless after reading it. I loved the descriptions, the metaphors, the imagery, everything. You had great characterization, and it was a great start to the whole book. All the chapters had great descriptions, which really added to the whole feel of the story. I like how the both of them meet, it's natural, and it flows well. You also have great characterization and I can really tell what kind of person Aurora is. It matches the way she acts, and I love that she develops as the story progresses. One thing, I think you spelled "miserable" wrong in Chapter 2. Great work!

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

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- bluecrayonlady