First Impression: nice cover and really cool and interesting summary
Great descriptions throughout the story! I love the plot idea, and the story itself. It's exciting and there's always something new going on. I love how I'm not bored at any point of the story. I like that you give background information and switch points of views throughout to give us insight on each character. It takes skill to be able to alternate between points of views and not confuse your audience. I really enjoy this story, and I'm excited to continue reading. I do have a question. Are the first few chapters of the story character profiles?
Overall, I highly recommend this story.
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