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Review #18: Sunset

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від bluecrayonlady

Присвячено diligent

від bluecrayonlady

diligent

First Impression: nice cover

This is a beautifully written piece. I love how you analyze something so complex and relatable, and it really makes me stop and think. You have great descriptions and good vocabulary that really help enhance the story. I really like how you create and set up the mood through your writing. One question though, what did you mean by the story is a "moment capture?"

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

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- bluecrayonlady