YOU ARE READING

Book Reviews 2 [SLOW UPDATES]

Random

This is the second book for Book Reviews! The first one is completed, so please don't comment your request there. If you comment there, I won't respond. Again, here are the rules! Submit a form to get your book reviewed! Please remember that thes...

#book #reviews

Review #41: The Complications Between Penelope Nelson & Ashton Wright

15 1 1

by bluecrayonlady

Dedicated to MeeHatesYoouu

by bluecrayonlady

MeeHatessYoouu

First Impression: that's a really long title

Since there is only the prologue up, there's not much I can say. It's a good plot idea, so you should definitely continue, and your summary is great. Your grammar is pretty much spot on and verb tense is pretty consistent too. I like the prologue, it's short and interesting. I do have some questions though, and hopefully these will be answered in future chapters.

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

If you are feeling nice, I would greatly appreciate it if you read one of my books, follow me, or give me a shoutout! If you enjoy making art, I would love for you to make something for one of my stories, and I will post it!

Lastly, please comment below a rating of how helpful this review was for you (out of 5 stars) Be honest, it will help me! Thanks :)

- bluecrayonlady