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Review #26: The Fox and The Forest

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ni bluecrayonlady

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ni bluecrayonlady

hippywitch

First Impression: cool username, haha :)

You have a very informative summary/blurb and you do a great job explaining the world they live in. This is something very hard, especially when you're writing stuff that is in the future, but you do a great job. You also have great characterization, which really helps with the story and adds to the development of Kate. I really like your descriptions, which are vital in a story like this. I like that it's in a different world, so it's like a new perspective on our world today. One thing, make sure to use quotation marks when writing dialogue, the ones that are shaped like this " "

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

If you are feeling nice, I would greatly appreciate it if you give one of my stories a read, follow me, or give me a shoutout! If you enjoy making art, I would love for you to make something for one of my stories, and I will post it!

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