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Review #71: Saving Annabel

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by bluecrayonlady

Dedicated to justaddchocolate

by bluecrayonlady

justaddchocolate

First Impression: love the blurb and cover!

I read the rewritten version, which has one part posted so far. I do have to say that I really enjoy what you have so far. You give a great detailed introduction, and there is plenty of imagery that I can picture in my head. I also love the connections that you develop between the main character and her sister Annabel. I'm interested to learn more about their situation and how the main character deals with this conflict. I do wish there was more description on her looks and her age, but that can come in the next chapter. Great work!

Overall, great start to this story; would definitely recommend.

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- bluecrayonlady