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Review #20: Phone Calls

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by bluecrayonlady

by bluecrayonlady

_QueenEmily_

First Impression: cute cover!

Your prologue is very well planned and well written. I like how it's simple, but gives so much information. I also like the dialogue between the two, and the concept behind this story is nice. I found one grammar issue in the chapter titled "forever." The sentence, "Yep, their as beautiful as you," uses the wrong form; it should be changed to "they're" because "they are as beautiful as you." Great work!

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

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- bluecrayonlady