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Review #65: Beneath the Marfa Lights

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by bluecrayonlady

Dedicated to sincerelyshayleigh

by bluecrayonlady

sincerelyshayleigh

First Impression: short and simple summary; love the cover

Good job creating the internal conflict and leading it up the main reveal. I also like that you give background information in the beginning of the story. It was definitely confusing reading it without any context of which contest this was for, but the writing itself is great. I do have a question. What are the Marfa Lights? Also, there are some spelling errors. For example, in the first chapter, you write, "The sirens whale louder and louder..." It should be "wail," not "whale."

Overall, this story is great.

Remember that these suggestions are just my opinion, and this is your story, so make sure to write it the way you want it to be! If you don't agree with any of my suggestions, then ignore them :)

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- bluecrayonlady